Monday, December 20, 2010

unparalleled love....unparalleled pain....

like two sides of a river,
parallel running rails,
never meeting ends of sea,
we walked on never meeting trails

parallel worlds that exist together
of gods and humans, perfections and imperfections
two sides of a coin, assurances and hesitations
we couldn't be together amongst acceptances and rejections

we started together but travelled aloof
we held our hands ,it wasn't adorned
my soliloquy ,you engrossed in other thoughts
meeting of eyes could only see barren roads

rekindling the dead,revive to die again
reunite distant souls,stench of lingering pain
intertwined fingers,choking breath
grandeur of our love,now overwhelming bane
 PROMPT: PARALLEL

10 comments:

Aulawi Ahmad said...

really touching poem, tq 4 share :)

Fatima said...

Quite a poem...opposite yet together..that's the way of life !
Liked it a lot :)

Deepika Vasudeva said...

"Parallel worlds that exist together
Of gods and humans, perfections and imperfections
Two sides of a coin, assurances and hesitations"

Two world, which are meant to go parallel yet not meeting ever, but still they survive by just knowing that other one is yet running... a synonym of life.. ain't it?

The Fallen Poet said...

@aulawi ahmed...thanks a lot buddy
@Fatima....thanks for liking it...i'm glad

@Deepika Vasudeva...so very true...yeahi 'm glad you got the gist of the whole poem in just one line...thanks for the feedback...

joshi daniel said...

interesting and true!

The Fallen Poet said...

@Joshi Daniel...thanks a lot bro...for feedback and read..i aprpeciate that

subtlescribbler said...

well crafted poem...true love has to undergo a lot of pain and turmoil.
i love the last para a lot.. :)

sarah

The Fallen Poet said...

SUBTLESCRIBBLER... thanks for the wonderful feedback...i appreciate the comments...thanks for reading...i'm glad you liked it...

Mohini said...

Hey Natwar......

Reflecting emotions from the heart...
Really loved this . touched the heart!

The Fallen Poet said...

thanks a lot Mohini...for reading and commenting...i appreciate that...