There are certain emotions,feelings in one's life, which are overwhelming..Love being the grandest of all....but like they say...anything overwhelming doesn't lasts long....
Thursday, December 16, 2010
my only love letter....
the only love letter i ever got
was full of apologies when you left
forget and forgive,we couldn't be together
not even a look,to leave bereft
a sorry,and all's done
you certainly did make standards of love,heft....
yeah...thanks for the comment...actually the picture prompt was to define it in 13 words...the other verses i have justadded later to make it look like complete...well, i can actually try to make it a sonnet...
i had received a love letter from a girl asking me will u marry me. i'd rather call it proposal letter. and the remaining all i said the cons and pros of marring her....he he...the only love letter i received till date...still safe in my locker.
i reminded about that dude...really a nice post...and the pic was superb
@deepika...thanks for visiting the blog...and many thanks for commenting....i really appreciate that... @manoj..you're one lucky guy...i generally write from my experiences... anyways thanks a lot for your comments...i appreciate that
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It was nice.
Could be a sonnet
yeah...thanks for the comment...actually the picture prompt was to define it in 13 words...the other verses i have justadded later to make it look like complete...well, i can actually try to make it a sonnet...
Oh to define the pic in 13 words? Well thats quite tough, but still you did good job ! Although I felt words spoke very silently yet powerfully ! :)
@ dreamygal...yeah i just wrote the first stanza as a contest entry....remaining i added later...thanks for your comment anyways
very well written. touchy.
@pramod..thanks a lot buddy
Did you shoot that picture? It so very well goes with the poem! There is quiet some depth in here!! Like your place...!!
No, i didnt shoot this pic...i am a member of an online poerty club...they had a contest based on this picture...hence i wrote this
wow! that was such a beautiful piece of writing and given the promt... amazing..
i had received a love letter from a girl asking me will u marry me. i'd rather call it proposal letter. and the remaining all i said the cons and pros of marring her....he he...the only love letter i received till date...still safe in my locker.
i reminded about that dude...really a nice post...and the pic was superb
@deepika...thanks for visiting the blog...and many thanks for commenting....i really appreciate that...
@manoj..you're one lucky guy...i generally write from my experiences...
anyways thanks a lot for your comments...i appreciate that
Nice poem with deep meaning :)
Simple yet powerful!!
thanks a lot Aulawi Ahmed...thanks for reading and feedback...
hey Ranjini...thanks a lot for reading and commenting...i appreciate that...
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