Thursday, December 16, 2010

my only love letter....

the only love letter i ever got
was full of apologies when you left

forget and forgive,we couldn't be together
not even a look,to leave bereft

a sorry,and all's done
you certainly did make standards of love,heft....

PROMPT: the picture above

15 comments:

The Lone Soldier said...

It was nice.
Could be a sonnet

The Fallen Poet said...

yeah...thanks for the comment...actually the picture prompt was to define it in 13 words...the other verses i have justadded later to make it look like complete...well, i can actually try to make it a sonnet...

adreamygal said...

Oh to define the pic in 13 words? Well thats quite tough, but still you did good job ! Although I felt words spoke very silently yet powerfully ! :)

The Fallen Poet said...

@ dreamygal...yeah i just wrote the first stanza as a contest entry....remaining i added later...thanks for your comment anyways

pramod said...

very well written. touchy.

The Fallen Poet said...

@pramod..thanks a lot buddy

Cardamom Hills said...

Did you shoot that picture? It so very well goes with the poem! There is quiet some depth in here!! Like your place...!!

The Fallen Poet said...

No, i didnt shoot this pic...i am a member of an online poerty club...they had a contest based on this picture...hence i wrote this

Deepika Vasudeva said...

wow! that was such a beautiful piece of writing and given the promt... amazing..

Manoj Kumar said...

i had received a love letter from a girl asking me will u marry me. i'd rather call it proposal letter. and the remaining all i said the cons and pros of marring her....he he...the only love letter i received till date...still safe in my locker.

i reminded about that dude...really a nice post...and the pic was superb

The Fallen Poet said...

@deepika...thanks for visiting the blog...and many thanks for commenting....i really appreciate that...
@manoj..you're one lucky guy...i generally write from my experiences...
anyways thanks a lot for your comments...i appreciate that

aulawi ahmad said...

Nice poem with deep meaning :)

kranjini said...

Simple yet powerful!!

The Fallen Poet said...

thanks a lot Aulawi Ahmed...thanks for reading and feedback...

The Fallen Poet said...

hey Ranjini...thanks a lot for reading and commenting...i appreciate that...