Monday, December 13, 2010

heart,emotions n soul....

heart is glass
shatters at betrayal
emotions are ice
meltdown at disapproval
soul is silver
bows down dismal..
everything's lost
pains,misery abysmal....


PS: wrote this for a contest, the prompt was"GLASS,ICE n SILVER..."

5 comments:

Manoj Kumar said...

hi dude...

what u said is absolutely true....

heart is just a glass...it can bear some scratches but can stand. must be handled carefully

shruthi said...

Nice poem Natwar Tiwariji

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Puja Upadhyay said...

Absolutely love your 'about me' write up. Glanced at your blog, will be back to savour it at a more lazed pace sometime soon.
Thanks for the comment on my blog.

Deepika Vasudeva said...

that was wonderful given u had to use given cues instead of own choices of words... really very very nice!

The Fallen Poet said...

@Manoj Kumar...so very true..thanks a lot for your feedback
@Shruthi-Thanks for the accolades
@Puja Upadhyaya-Thanks for taking time to read,i appreciate that
@Deepika Vasudeva-thanks a lot for your comments...i appreciate your feedback