Monday, August 22, 2011

struggle of life for life....

timorous soul
alive and awake
getting through life
this endless wait

when does it end?
what to achieve?
name,fame or love!!
how you perceive?

life is deranged
mind estranged
off track is the course
through coarse trails

its rough and thorny
sun beaten path
starts with a pain
ends in a wrath

kiss me good bye
wish me luck
for i may be forgotten
face down in the muck

i may be lost
in this wilderness
but remember one thing
i tried my best..

everyone wants to be a turret stone
flashy ,shiny ,well honed
but to hold the wall of this place alone
someone has to choose to be the foundation stone....
\prompt: the picture (courtesy google images)
i too want to leave a mark when i am gone....but if its not possible...i just want to make a i should be satisfied when i am on the verge...


sowmya said...

realistic thoughts nice attempt :)
keep writing & smiling always :)

The Fallen Poet said...

@sowmya...thanks a lot for reading..i am glad you liked it...i appreciate your too keep smiling..

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Rajesh said...

Wonderfully put together.

The Fallen Poet said...

@Rajesh...thanks a lot for your feedback...i appreciate that...

Sujatha Sathya said...

i guess that's what matters in the end: have we tried our best?
good poem - simple words but something to think about

can u pls remove the word verification for comments?

The Fallen Poet said...

@Sujatha, you got it right...a lot of people say that means matters and not the end....but for me its the end that matters....

its just the outburst of my thoughts that is hovering around me for few years now..

Thanks a lot for reading ,and i appreciate your feedback...i am glad you liked it...

P.S. i have removed the work verification

Kalyan said...

lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!

The Fallen Poet said...

@Kalyan...apologies for late reply....but i am glad you liked this write...thanks a lot for reading and comments...