timorous soul
alive and awake
getting through life
this endless wait
when does it end?
what to achieve?
name,fame or love!!
how you perceive?
life is deranged
mind estranged
off track is the course
through coarse trails
its rough and thorny
sun beaten path
starts with a pain
ends in a wrath
kiss me good bye
wish me luck
for i may be forgotten
face down in the muck
i may be lost
in this wilderness
but remember one thing
i tried my best..
everyone wants to be a turret stone
flashy ,shiny ,well honed
but to hold the wall of this place alone
someone has to choose to be the foundation stone....
~thefallenpoet
\prompt: the picture (courtesy google images)i too want to leave a mark when i am gone....but if its not possible...i just want to make a contribution....so i should be satisfied when i am on the verge...
9 comments:
realistic thoughts nice attempt :)
keep writing & smiling always :)
@sowmya...thanks a lot for reading..i am glad you liked it...i appreciate your feedback...you too keep smiling..
Wonderfully put together.
@Rajesh...thanks a lot for your feedback...i appreciate that...
i guess that's what matters in the end: have we tried our best?
good poem - simple words but something to think about
can u pls remove the word verification for comments?
@Sujatha, you got it right...a lot of people say that means matters and not the end....but for me its the end that matters....
its just the outburst of my thoughts that is hovering around me for few years now..
Thanks a lot for reading ,and i appreciate your feedback...i am glad you liked it...
P.S. i have removed the work verification
lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!
@Kalyan...apologies for late reply....but i am glad you liked this write...thanks a lot for reading and comments...
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