Thursday, October 6, 2011

the great escape...

big restaurant
with girl of my dreams
sparkling wine ,popping champagne
some brule de creme

had a gala time
till its time to be back
landed in soup
at the sight of check

suddenly i remembered
the escape routine
let me wash my hands
i am a man of hygiene


Prompt: a funny attempt at how to avoid paying the bill.....when on the first date.
**tried and tested***

5 comments:

Saru Singhal said...

LOL, creativity at it's best when you have save your pocket. Beautiful poem with some money saving tips. I loved it!

Saru

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sowmya said...

humor poem i have ever read :D ! its simple & superb...

specially this stanza :D

suddenly i remembered
the escape routine
let me wash my hands
i am a man of hygiene

The Fallen Poet said...

@sowmya..thanks a lot for your feedback....i am glad you liked it...just an attempt at a funny prompt..

The Fallen Poet said...

@Saru Singhal.....thanks a lot for your feedback...i am glad you liked it....thanks again