void in the eyes,
staring in the skies
sorrow laden heart
howls and cries
detachment to life
don't want love or fame
i don't give a damn
about my existence
all seems lost
taken,broken or tossed
hiding myself from winds
in shadow of crumbling walls
waited all my life
wandering in this desert
quenching my thirst with tears
mending the cracked skin with mud
no matter how much i try
can't seem to satisfy
my aspirations and ambitions
have i taken it too high?
yes! i would like to die
but this demeaning death would defy
my struggles,my pains,my strive
for excellence,and pain stricken smile...
Prompt: written for a poetry contest with prompt "there are voids in every body's life but what if the life itself is in a void"
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6 comments:
thats a curious question u raise...what if life itself was teh void, something i have never thought about.
Once again a poem which can fit well on the topic...Loved the second last paragraph...
@Chim's ...that's just a thought which haunts sometimes.....thanks a lot for reading...i am glad you liked it..
@Saru Singhal....i really appreciate your feedback...i am glad you like my writing...thank you
Visiting your blog after sometime. Nice lines. Somewhat I could relate myself to your poem.
@Ranj....long time!!! thanks for reading and commenting....i appreciate your feedback...
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