as year end closing in
worn out clouds would part
a new dawn is awaiting
clock is ticking
to end this decade
till the last 12 strokes
of final hours,anxious wait
time,ageless old friend
teaches through laughs n pains
time withholding integrity
overwhelms life's frames
old times that got over
some good,some bad
wish you all a new era
grow,prosper and be glad
Prompt: Time/New YearPS: Due to time constraint got less time to work on this...On a request of a fellow blogger.
My new year wishes for you all.
please share your suggestions and feedback, if you think it lacks somewhere in appeal.
16 comments:
nice n touching poem, happy new year for u :)
@aulawi ahmed...thanks a lot buddy...have a happy new year
thats totally true... there nothing better than time to befriend. for it would neither ever leave u behind and nor would be partial, to take u with it. just a shadow to go along....
happy new year.
@Deepika...thanks for your invaluable feedback...truly said...time is the biggest friend and a foe too...so don;t lag behind and it'll be with you...happy new year to you too...
Happy and Prosperous New Year....
Great poerty....but that one word cannot justify your poetry dude...
@Manoj...thanks a lot Buddy...that one word was given to me to write about :)...thanks a lot for your feedback ...i appreciate that
Loved your poem...Happy New Year to you too
Lovely poem... makes you want to look forward to next year. Have a Happy New Year.
Hi Natwar! Such a deep poem.....suddenly made me 'Antarmukh!'Wonderful..
Hey Wish you a wonderful new decade and year ahead! And for us wonderful poems for you!
Hey Wish you a wonderful new decade and year ahead! And for us wonderful poems for you!
Simply beautiful.
Happy New Year and may it be a successful one for you and all :D
@Uma.a....happy new year to you too...thanks for the wonderful comment....
@Tracy Butler...thanks for the visit...Happy new year to you too...m glad you liked the poem
@Mohinee...thanks for all the wishes...i hope the very best of everything for you too...m glad you liked my poem...yes it did made me "Antarmukh" too...
@Ranjini....thanks a lot ...glad you liked it...very happy n prosperous new year to you too
Hi - loved it. Happy new year to you too. I wrote a new year poem too if you'd care to look at it? Its's here
http://wordsinsync.blogspot.com/2010/12/happy-new-year-to-all-fellow-bloggers.html?utm_source=BP_recent
Best wishes. Shah. X
Wonderful poem focusing on a new start in life, by remembering the lessons learned in the past and the bubbling hope for the future. Well penned.
A lovely poem to begin the year with...What else can I ask for...
Happy New Year...
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