Thursday, December 30, 2010

ageless old friend....

time has come to bid goodbye
as year end closing in
worn out clouds would part
a new dawn is awaiting

clock is ticking
to end this decade
till the last 12 strokes
of final hours,anxious wait

time,ageless old friend
teaches through laughs n pains
time withholding integrity 
overwhelms life's frames

old times that got over
some good,some bad
wish you all a new era
grow,prosper and be glad

Prompt: Time/New Year



PS: Due to time constraint got less time to work on this...On a request of a fellow blogger.
My new year wishes for you all.
please share your suggestions and feedback, if you think it lacks somewhere in appeal.

16 comments:

Aulawi Ahmad said...

nice n touching poem, happy new year for u :)

The Fallen Poet said...

@aulawi ahmed...thanks a lot buddy...have a happy new year

deepika said...

thats totally true... there nothing better than time to befriend. for it would neither ever leave u behind and nor would be partial, to take u with it. just a shadow to go along....
happy new year.

The Fallen Poet said...

@Deepika...thanks for your invaluable feedback...truly said...time is the biggest friend and a foe too...so don;t lag behind and it'll be with you...happy new year to you too...

Manoj Kumar said...

Happy and Prosperous New Year....

Great poerty....but that one word cannot justify your poetry dude...

The Fallen Poet said...

@Manoj...thanks a lot Buddy...that one word was given to me to write about :)...thanks a lot for your feedback ...i appreciate that

uma.a said...

Loved your poem...Happy New Year to you too

Tracy Butler said...

Lovely poem... makes you want to look forward to next year. Have a Happy New Year.

Mohinee said...

Hi Natwar! Such a deep poem.....suddenly made me 'Antarmukh!'Wonderful..

Mohinee said...

Hey Wish you a wonderful new decade and year ahead! And for us wonderful poems for you!

Mohinee said...

Hey Wish you a wonderful new decade and year ahead! And for us wonderful poems for you!

kranjini said...

Simply beautiful.
Happy New Year and may it be a successful one for you and all :D

The Fallen Poet said...

@Uma.a....happy new year to you too...thanks for the wonderful comment....

@Tracy Butler...thanks for the visit...Happy new year to you too...m glad you liked the poem

@Mohinee...thanks for all the wishes...i hope the very best of everything for you too...m glad you liked my poem...yes it did made me "Antarmukh" too...

@Ranjini....thanks a lot ...glad you liked it...very happy n prosperous new year to you too

shah wharton said...

Hi - loved it. Happy new year to you too. I wrote a new year poem too if you'd care to look at it? Its's here
http://wordsinsync.blogspot.com/2010/12/happy-new-year-to-all-fellow-bloggers.html?utm_source=BP_recent

Best wishes. Shah. X

Enigmatic Soul said...

Wonderful poem focusing on a new start in life, by remembering the lessons learned in the past and the bubbling hope for the future. Well penned.

Saru Singhal said...

A lovely poem to begin the year with...What else can I ask for...

Happy New Year...