Monday, December 27, 2010

fragile sensuality....

art redefined,beauty unexplained
color and canvass,portrayal of dame
for some sensuality of love
for some whispering of shame

beauty lies in spirit,
acquiescence of blame
artwork of almighty,
sensuous luscious frame

voluptuous art,on oil and canvas
curvaceous beauty of fragile lovely lass
not meant for touching,perceive and admire
for feelings may stain,touch may break the glass

PROMPT: the picture above...Credit Yahoo Images..



Deepika said...

u spell bound me with the perfection u write.. and sensuality it beholds in un-explainable...

Tracy Butler said...

I just wanted to say thank you for your lovely comment on my painting. You've made me feel thoroughly, um, smiley. Not very poetic, I know. If you wouldn't mind, I'd love to read your poem when you are ready... I have also just read your latest poem, and it is beautiful.

shah wharton said...

I am your latest follower and love your work here.

Thanks for kind review. Do come and be a follower at Also, if you'd like to do a guest post - let me know. I'm using the prompt 'Time' for new year right now if you like, or next month I plan to do 'Spring.'

The Fallen Poet said...

@deepika...thanks a lot for lovely comment again...m glad you liked it.

@tracy...i would love to write something about your painting...and it would certainly be an honour for me to have you read it first....i will post it on your blog comments ...whenever i am ready...
and thanks for liking my poem...i appreciate your feedback

The Fallen Poet said...

@Shah Wharton...thanks a lot for reading and feedback...i am glad you liked it and appreciate that...
i would love to do a guest post ...thanks a lot for the offer...i will post it whenever i am ready...i mean of course before new year eve,,,

AK said...

Beautiful.. :)
And I love the way you've described it and given it such a delicate and beautiful description..
Really lovely.. I love the way you write.. :)

The Fallen Poet said...

@Ak...thanks a lot for your visit, i am so glad you liked it...thanks for reading and commenting..i appreciate that