Thursday, March 10, 2011

the phoenix...

gone with the wind
woke up from slumber
here i am again
reeling from my cumber

past is dead,long gone
dwelling in past,you moron!!
wake up to dark,sunless day
burn yourself, kill that gray


you're a phoenix
yielding armour of god
you're blessed
just remember the thought

just be yourself
identify the true
some more hike
and you're through


Prompt: trying to recover from a dead slumber, i am not going down without a fight
"i won't vanish into the night,
i won't go without a fight"


13 comments:

kranjini said...

Yeah, that's the spirit...Keep it up...Nice poem too.....

Fatima said...

Nice poem...quite uplifting for one's moral !!

Keep writing :)

Manoj Kumar said...

Poem studded with pearls of moral in it...

I dont know why u choose to end up short. But, u carve them easily with your excellent talent

Hats offf

The Fallen Poet said...

@Kranjini....thanks a lot for your feedback...
@Fatima....thanks for the nice words
@manoj....Bang on!!! i had to cut it short....i had so many thoughts couldn't mould them into words...so here it is...thanks a lot for reading..
PS....i am a bit busy these days so apologies for the late acknowledgement....

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Anonymous said...

You couldnt be more right!!!

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

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