gone with the wind woke up from slumber
here i am again
reeling from my cumber
past is dead,long gone
dwelling in past,you moron!!
wake up to dark,sunless day
burn yourself, kill that gray
you're a phoenix
yielding armour of god
you're blessed
just remember the thought
just be yourself
identify the true
some more hike
and you're through
Prompt: trying to recover from a dead slumber, i am not going down without a fight
"i won't vanish into the night,i won't go without a fight"
13 comments:
Yeah, that's the spirit...Keep it up...Nice poem too.....
Nice poem...quite uplifting for one's moral !!
Keep writing :)
Poem studded with pearls of moral in it...
I dont know why u choose to end up short. But, u carve them easily with your excellent talent
Hats offf
@Kranjini....thanks a lot for your feedback...
@Fatima....thanks for the nice words
@manoj....Bang on!!! i had to cut it short....i had so many thoughts couldn't mould them into words...so here it is...thanks a lot for reading..
PS....i am a bit busy these days so apologies for the late acknowledgement....
Some communicative article!
What an all 'round well written piece...
An all around great article!
You couldnt be more right!!!
Incredibly well written post..
Admirable post!
This definitely makes perfect sense to me...
An all 'round well thought out article!
First class blog!!
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