Friday, January 7, 2011

bind me free....



naked in shower,out of breath
shivers of death,love's aftermath

i cry in the rains,so no one can see
i walk alone ,pretend i am free

shred to pieces,chopped soul
burning wet wood,smoke tears roll





every fallen leaf remind me of spring
smooth touching air ,venomous sting

leave me alone,reside within me
fall apart from me,bind me free

Picture Prompt courtsey: Google Images

13 comments:

Expression said...

sad but true

The Fallen Poet said...

yeah so very true...thanks for the read though...

Deepika said...

We can't move on until we let go of past.. Bind me along or set me free.. Good one !

Manu said...

hey dude...i hope you had not seen me crying in the rain....the same happened with me once....

taken back to the good old days...thanks for that...

he he

another poetry that stuck my heart @ Manu

subtlescribbler said...

beauty! every fallen leave reminds me of spring...i loved this line. the fall does bring in many memories unperturbed till then...btw y r u 'the fallen poet' ? :)

sarah

The Fallen Poet said...

@ Deepika...yeah i do agree...thanks for the feedback...i am glad you liked it
@ Manu...we all ,at some point of time go through same emotions...so many thanks you could relate to it and understand the feelings ...thanks for the feedback...
@ Subtlescribbler...well, a couple of things...first of all i started writing when i was heart broken(guess we all need some inspiration ..lol) and other reason ..i love the band "Poets of the Fall"-carnival of rust song...and i just thought of this name and it struck and then stuck...thanks for the comments..i appreciate your feedback

Chim's World of Literature said...

i can relate to this.
i tried to move on, but its hard when your heart is still with that person....how can you move on if you havent let go..

baili said...

each line has aspect of life

sadness is kind of strong version of life ,

really beautiful
god bless

Tracy Butler said...

It brings back memories from a passed life...

Fatima said...

Bind me or set me free !! Not that easy to let go and move on...easier said than done...

Too true to be true!

Nice one.

Take Care,
Fatima

_deepsikha_ said...

''smooth touching air ,venomous sting''...a line will stick to the mind.

kranjini said...

Sounds like me....hmm...
well written, precise and to the point...to let go or to bind? move on or to turn back?? hmm.........

Fish said...

Happens with everyone. We can empathize more being the extremist. That is what I believe.

Your expressions n emotions blended with your words gives a sweetly- spiced flavor of past.

Kind Regards,
Fish