naked in shower,out of breath
shivers of death,love's aftermath
i cry in the rains,so no one can see
i walk alone ,pretend i am free
shred to pieces,chopped soul
burning wet wood,smoke tears roll
every fallen leaf remind me of spring
smooth touching air ,venomous sting
leave me alone,reside within me
fall apart from me,bind me free
Picture Prompt courtsey: Google Images
13 comments:
sad but true
yeah so very true...thanks for the read though...
We can't move on until we let go of past.. Bind me along or set me free.. Good one !
hey dude...i hope you had not seen me crying in the rain....the same happened with me once....
taken back to the good old days...thanks for that...
he he
another poetry that stuck my heart @ Manu
beauty! every fallen leave reminds me of spring...i loved this line. the fall does bring in many memories unperturbed till then...btw y r u 'the fallen poet' ? :)
sarah
@ Deepika...yeah i do agree...thanks for the feedback...i am glad you liked it
@ Manu...we all ,at some point of time go through same emotions...so many thanks you could relate to it and understand the feelings ...thanks for the feedback...
@ Subtlescribbler...well, a couple of things...first of all i started writing when i was heart broken(guess we all need some inspiration ..lol) and other reason ..i love the band "Poets of the Fall"-carnival of rust song...and i just thought of this name and it struck and then stuck...thanks for the comments..i appreciate your feedback
i can relate to this.
i tried to move on, but its hard when your heart is still with that person....how can you move on if you havent let go..
each line has aspect of life
sadness is kind of strong version of life ,
really beautiful
god bless
It brings back memories from a passed life...
Bind me or set me free !! Not that easy to let go and move on...easier said than done...
Too true to be true!
Nice one.
Take Care,
Fatima
''smooth touching air ,venomous sting''...a line will stick to the mind.
Sounds like me....hmm...
well written, precise and to the point...to let go or to bind? move on or to turn back?? hmm.........
Happens with everyone. We can empathize more being the extremist. That is what I believe.
Your expressions n emotions blended with your words gives a sweetly- spiced flavor of past.
Kind Regards,
Fish
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