Saturday, April 30, 2011

do you miss something you never knew.....

i know your imaginations,
perceptions with the picture above
i know you miss that thing
called "Unconditional love"

what i see is the aftermath
of being hopelessly romantic
what i see is this moment wont last
serenity and calmness would turn frantic

red is not beautiful
when its bleeding broken heart
the moment which you lived here
would tear your heart apart

you'd die to relive this moment
but these times wont return
its a picture of misery and pain
while you're watching this picture burn

love starts like a storm
takes over everything in its way
but soon it dies,with thunder and cries
and ashes wash away....

and someday then everything is lost
taking love,life and soul apart
so the moment now you cherish most
will haunt you forever till you last...

have you missed anything,
that you never knew
never miss that "love"
its never pure or true....

Prompt: well the picture was sent by one of my friends, but she wanted me to write a sad poem for such a lovely picture, i have tried to write this poem as a conversation , a frantic attempt i think....
so suggestions and criticism are welcome.....
 

7 comments:

J Daniel said...

Lovely poem. n you are awesome :)

Deepika said...

This picture is special to me since the time unknown to me. The first i saw it i saw it the hopelessly romantic couple drowned in love valley unknown to the world around... Now that i see through your eyes. I see a girl sitting near windows with tears staining her eyes... Thinking about this moment and wishing it to return.... But in vain.

The Fallen Poet said...

@Daniel...hey buddy thanks a lot for reading....i am glad you liked it...

@Deepika...well its just another perspective to the picture...and i was asked to give my opinion....well thanks a lot for your lovely comments...i am glad you liked it...i appreciate your feedback...

Nisheeth Ranjan said...

If you want to write a sad poem for this pic then i think they guys in the pic were meeting for the last time :)...But great compilation indeed brother...Keep posting such great poems.. :)

The Fallen Poet said...

@nisheeth...thanks a lot buddy...your thought is profound ...i'll try to write another one on that....thanks for input...i am glad you liked it...

the feeling lioness said...

the poem's alright

The Fallen Poet said...

@feeling lioness...thanks for reading..i appreciate your feedback...